My kid for this month was
Laiba. She wrote a story about two girls named Dawn and May. They were on a journey to find the rarest honey. Whoever found that honey, was named king or queen of the kingdom. They eventually found the honey, and was taken to the kingdom, where spiders jostled them into the kingdom.
My comment for her said that she is very creative and imaginative. I told her I wish there was more to the story, because I was curious to see what happened. I also told her that this story could give other children the inspiration to be a creative writer and to keep up the good work.
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